The Horse's Bit

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By anndavis25

A Noble Animal

A beast of goodwill

Running for heartless men, treated ill

stalled up in stables

Left to shiver in the cold

Fed cold 'bits'

Rushed with utmost speed

Racing through a summer heat

Heart beating wild

Reins pulled tight

Tested far beyond their strength

Scraped by curry combs

Clipped nude spots exposed

Driven until lame

Then turned out to pasture

Oh what a noble animal

Oh to be treated so

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DonnaCosmato profile image

DonnaCosmato Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

What a magnificent horse Secretariat was! This is an awesome tribute to his memory.

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jacqui2011 Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Secretariat was a fantastic horse. "Big Red" was a hero. Lovely photo of him.

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Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

I know nothing but this poem. This is delightful read.

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anndavis25 Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you for bringing my attention to Big Red. I changed the picture. I just recently rented the movie of Secretariat, and it inspired me. Come back again Jacqui

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anndavis25 Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you Donna. I thought you were a horse lover.

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anndavis25 Hub Author 3 months ago

Vinaya, stop by again. I appreciate your comment.

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Hello Ann, an awesome poem and tribute.

Fabulous writing, excellent work and voted up

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Sky9106 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Love horses and they are Noble animals that always gives their all.

Great read , and I felt each word. Keep up the good work.

Bless.

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